Peer Analysis of Rough Cut/Focus Group

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Peer blog review

After completing our rough cut, we asked a group of our classmates to watch our rough cut of our thriller opening. After they had watched it, we asked them what positives that they could take from the film and what they think we did well. They gave positive comments about it and especially praised us about how we managed to get the dog to co-operate in the film. They praised how well we got the dog to act.  We also asked our peers if they had anything that they didn’t like or understand with our film. We did get constructive criticism about the ending of our film and how it wasn't finished and how people may have found it to be confusing. As the ending is not quite finished filming, we already knew about this and will be fixing these errors. It wasn’t clear to understand. Another error that they spotted was the whole car scene that we already knew was a mess. They spotted the continuity error, which was the car door, which was open when Freddie was on the laptop. This is an obvious error as they was able to point it out straight away so that will be an improvement that we will do when we come to filming again.